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Old 08-28-2009, 02:22 AM   #9 (permalink)
Ravenkin
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The Room

In a Room, deep inside...
The dark recesses, of my mind,
Dwells a place of candle-lit purity.
We were alone, o so cold...
Such a sight, to behold,
The Illusion of dancing flames tranquility.

Comfort sets, slight regret...
That i tend to forget,
That moment in time our eyes first locked.
No words to disturb...
The minute that i learned,
How loves sweet embrace could kill a man.

So we sat, quite content...
Souls tangled,
Not wanting to unravel.
What a beautiful mess we manifest!

Time is standing, years go by...
Love is dead, what a lie,
This memory of you..
Could last a lifetime.

She's fading now, Walls are melting...
Candles out, the world is burning,
As devious people begin to fill a strange new room.
What is this, consumed bliss...
Walls of pads, the needle missed,
That syringe holds the gateway to my heart.

"This ones abit different from my other writings. I couldn't sleep tonight and this idea popped in my head. Critique it, i know there is probably a problem with grammer in there somewhere. Let me know what you think."
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