Ya keep it up, ur making the normal type mistakes (look on other threads for the normal advice) which will eventually work themselves out if you keep practicing and actually put some time into ur work (ie. editing)
looking forward to more
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"Not remotely! Because iocaine comes from Australia, as everyone knows. And Australia is entirely peopled with criminals. And criminals are used to having people not trust them as you are not trusted by me, so I can clearly not choose the wine in front of you."
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