There wasn't anything that stood out particularly, but it didn't feel cliche, so good job. I pretty much knew what it was about without the explanation.
I might have to try my hand at some romatic themed poetry now 
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"Not remotely! Because iocaine comes from Australia, as everyone knows. And Australia is entirely peopled with criminals. And criminals are used to having people not trust them as you are not trusted by me, so I can clearly not choose the wine in front of you."
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