i can't tell why i like your poetry exactly (well, some of it) because it is definitely not my usual style. hmmm. Still too ashamed of myself to offer further critique, but ill let you know.
Also, you need to post all your work in one thread, to save space.
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"Not remotely! Because iocaine comes from Australia, as everyone knows. And Australia is entirely peopled with criminals. And criminals are used to having people not trust them as you are not trusted by me, so I can clearly not choose the wine in front of you."
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