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Old 09-09-2009, 11:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
Shivs
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Hey TONO, you've got some pretty interesting stuff here, especially "F*ck the National Guard". There's a lotta good drive in that one, dude, but my only concern would be that these sound kinda more like poems as opposed to lyrics, but whatever man, you might have something in mind for them that I can't see. I'd be interested in reading parts of the novel you're working on, if you don't mind PM me some!
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