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Old 09-20-2009, 06:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
itstravassbro
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Here's one I wrote today.

No editing so far, it's straight off the dome. Gimme some crits, and I'll try to make it better.




Give me the time to pretend like i'm going to
do what i've wanted to, for so damn long.
I get the chance and I look in your eyes
I want to move foreward, but big ****ing surprize...

What do I do when I don't know how I feel?
What do I do when I don't know how you feel?


So long ago, you see I made a mistake.
I said just three words that I regret to this day.
If only I'd known just how stupid I was,
I wouldn't be in this position right now.

What do I do when I don't know how I feel?
What do I do when I don't know how you feel?

Now here we lay in my bed today,
I tickle you, we flirt and we play.
But when it comes time for your lips on mine
I'm too scared you'll get freaked out and run.

Maybe it's just me, but I think it's with you too
that feeling that we've got something else.
When most girls hear three words in their ear,
it's the start or the end of something great.

But I said them to you, and whether I meant them or not,
you didn't seem scared or happy, hell you didn't respond.
And what I notice the most is that you didn't run away,
you just kept being here with me everyday.

What do I do when I don't know how I feel?
What do I do when I don't know how you feel?

I guess I'm afraid of going to far,
We're so different now, it's not quite so bizzare
to say that I could be into you.

You let me hold you in my arms and you'll hold my hand
so why am I afraid of being your man?
I think it's fear that you're just as scared as me.

I'm tired of this, It's all hell, I wish we'd just kiss.
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