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It's better than some of the other stuff around here, though.
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Yes, but that's not a fair comparison. Anybody can write something and say it's better than everything else on this forum. That's like telling the writer he's better at guitar than a four year old. You compare their lyrics to those who manage to write them for a living, not the other way around.
And, in comparison to those that do write (well) for a living, it's lacking original rhetoric.
thank you,
-nick