i liked it, overall. the tone of the piece made me feel as if it should have some earth-shattering hidden meaning behind it. i think it'd be easier to understand and like if we knew what that secret meaning is. then again, maybe the ambiguity is intentional, and we're supposed to either figure it out ourselves, or just appreciate it for it's existance, and from where it stemmed from. like i said, i liked it. i think i would like it more if i knew where you were coming from, but i still like it even though i don't.
also- i loved the imagery and your choice of words. very nice. (:
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