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Old 11-04-2009, 07:19 PM   #85 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Malicious Wakizashi View Post
vleermuijzen
in de kelder
onder al mijn kleren
I'd say you might want to tone down the exposition a little bit


Here's a little ditty I'm composing on the spot

Wakizashi man had created a thread
to make fun of others, he has a big head

He's malicious for sure, that's an obvious fact
As a kid, perhaps his big head had been cracked?




It's abstract
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