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Old 11-12-2009, 12:41 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I'm still rewriting the songs but I've been working on a song for about a week and just have this so far but I would like to hear any feedback!

Born in the graves
Of many lost men
Victim of the shockwaves
That threw to the city

Walked through her journey
Alone and brave
Although dark blinded her
She never strayed

Saw many of sins
War and the unpure
But she was the light
That kept it all going

A push then a shove
A spoken silence
Shelter the graves
Of the innocent
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