this is the song from the first post.
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i just finished recording/mixing. the producer did it for free so there's no real incentive to make a masterpiece, but i feel it's pretty good; however i strongly believe there's something missing. i think i need to embellish the song more with those subtle sweeps that you can hear pan right, as well as other little liberties that i think need to be added in... some i couldn't put my finger on though. this song is *almost* complete, i thought i'd ask you guys for some input.
anyone have critiques?