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Old 11-27-2009, 08:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
iron9567
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title: Picking up the pieces

Your games/
They pushed me to far away/
I can no longer see me loving you/
And all the wants that you lied about/
And all the needs you demanded from me/
you never cared about me a single second/

tonight im going to start breathing on my own/
im trying to unweave the damage that you've done/
maybe it was best that we never this to work/
all the weight is lifted and i can see the light/
On this afternoon i spent waiting around on you/
I gave the final wasted day by the grip of your hands/

When the heart slowly breaks and falls on the floor,/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/

a shooting star later that night gave me some hope/
i knew i wasnt going to be alone for long/
I can’t explain the feeling that swept over me./
youre finding out things arent like you thought they were/
im wanting to tell you how things always come back around/

tonight im going to start breathing on my own/
im trying to unweave the damage that you've done/
maybe it was best that we never this to work/
all the weight is lifted and i can see the light/
On this afternoon i spent waiting around on you/
I gave the final wasted day by the grip of your hands/

[Chorus]
When the heart slowly breaks and falls on the floor,/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/.
you want to show me the reasons behind your actions/
It’s too late to try an tell me youre sorry for what youve done/
my heart has moved on for the finall time tonight/,
my heart has moved on for the finall time tonight/,


Now I’m with someone else that makes me happy/
my life has been so much better since i fell in love/
its my fault that i never seen what was in front of me all along/
It’s better than what you tried to show me through your eyes/

All the times i tried to prove the feelings i had for you/
Now im showing the feelings as i pass you on by/

[Chorus x2]

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Your games/
They pushed me to far away/
I can no longer see me loving you/
And all the wants that you lied about/
And all the needs you demanded from me/
you never cared about me a single second/

tonight im going to start breathing on my own/
im trying to unweave the damage that you've done/
maybe it was best that we never this to work/
all the weight is lifted and i can see the light/
On this afternoon i spent waiting around on you/
I gave the final wasted day by the grip of your hands/

When the heart slowly breaks and falls on the floor,/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/

a shooting star later that night gave me some hope/
i knew i wasnt going to be alone for long/
I can’t explain the feeling that swept over me./
youre finding out things arent like you thought they were/
im wanting to tell you how things always come back around/

tonight im going to start breathing on my own/
im trying to unweave the damage that you've done/
maybe it was best that we never this to work/
all the weight is lifted and i can see the light/
On this afternoon i spent waiting around on you/
I gave the final wasted day by the grip of your hands/

[Chorus]
When the heart slowly breaks and falls on the floor,/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/
i slowly pick up the pieces and move on/.
you want to show me the reasons behind your actions/
It’s too late to try an tell me youre sorry for what youve done/
my heart has moved on for the finall time tonight/,
my heart has moved on for the finall time tonight/,


Now I’m with someone else that makes me happy/
my life has been so much better since i fell in love/
its my fault that i never seen what was in front of me all along/
It’s better than what you tried to show me through your eyes/

All the times i tried to prove the feelings i had for you/
Now im showing the feelings as i pass you on by/

[Chorus x2]
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ok i got this song come to me earlier. I have no idea why it did, So i tried to make it as different as i could. This is an acoustic genre style song. Comment on it if you like to. It'll be interesting to see what people think when they read it.lol
thanks
the iron man


Title: Smeared lipstick
Heeey heeeey heeeeey

Your lipstick stains on my **** are blowing my mind
I knew it would feel good,
but didn't know it be such a mess
now my boxers look like I pissed on a rainbow
You need to use you mouth and clean it all up/
The smell of you on my balls are getting me sick/
I knew when we **** it'd be an interesting night/
now you're a *** stain away from being a regret/

Hey cheap street lady, how long is all this going to take
The way your moving it feels like it wont take much longer
Hey cheap street lady, you need to swallow just a little bit more

Heeey heeeey heeeey

Just a little bit of time, this is all I have to give tonight
youre working my **** tonight
this aint no love connection, but youre blowing my mind
makin me over look the smell to finish this nutt
any minute im going to unload this hose
In a back alley while the world passes by I could care less
for five bucks this is the best head i've ever gotten

Hey cheap street lady, how long is all this going to take
The way your moving it feels like it wont take much longer
Hey cheap street lady, you need to swallow just a little bit more

well can you clean the smeared lipstick
remove all signs from where you've been
I still got a home to go to
You're going to be a distant *** stain I wont forget
ill see you in every rainbow I see in the sky
the memory of your smeared lipstick on my ****
brings back more then just the smell of your breath

Hey cheap street lady, how long is all this going to take
The way your moving it feels like it wont take much longer
Hey cheap street lady, you need to swallow just a little bit more
Heeey heeeey heeeeey
Heeey heeeey heeeeey
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thanks
The iron man


I don't want to change the world. I just want to make the world colder then the day I came.
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