primo

wow.. lol hip-hop didn't even cross my mind! How does it strike you as rap? With exception of the chorus, most of it doesn't even really rhyme.

Anyway I wrote a second verse and bridge. Feel free to comment!

2nd Verse
Wanted to be somebody else my whole life,
Where has it got me? I'm lost as hell
Can't sense a path, just a destination
Don't think too much - might miss out on a free ride
Gotta shut out my peripherals,
Gotta shift my focus to climb out
'Cos this overflow of energy
is devoid.. of aim 'n execution

Chorus
I never really stopped.. waiting
for things to begin changing
I've always known that i'm the one
so what keeps me waiting?
I've gotta do something
before this train's derailing
Cos there’s nobody out there
Who’s gonna save me

End (Some songs have these.. what are they called? It's not really a bridge.. or is it?)
Now I could drink myself to sleep
Or I could wake up n be happy
I could float away on my back
Or I could steer, and fly high
But I could, I should, I would, I
Ye I would, I could, I should, I
Now I should, I would, I could, I
Yeh I could, yeh I could, yeh I should, I should

(guitar/synthesizer solo haha)

It won't change until I do