12-07-2009, 04:12 PM
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#307 (permalink)
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FakingSuicideForApplause
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: I live in a van down by the river
Posts: 1,365
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Freebase Dali
1. No comma present.
2. Should be 'your'.
3. Doesn't apply to what you're talking about.
4. Should be 'it does not'.
5. Should be 'written'.
6. This line makes absolutely no sense at all.
Edit: Neapolitan, if you're going to critique someone's grammar then you should probably work on your own first.
This is not me having a fake argument... as your own post has already insulted you enough.
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This needed to be said 
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