primo

Hey! lol I can't think of a second verse for now, but here's the first verse and chorus..
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

I feel suffocated
I long for independence
Responsible for me
Not for anybody else
Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
Self-defeatin’ safety
Intoxicatin’ barrier

that question re-iter-ates
what’s the meaning of life?
cos now there’s only dreams
no hope of substance

I try-to look up,
But the glare hurts my eyes
Can’t bloom or spread my wings
Until they release,
Release and let me fly