Hey Thrustin,
Your "Devil" song sounds technically perfect, I'd say. Again, because the instrumentals sound so traditional (that is, the music doesn't sound quirky--it sounds serious) I wouldn't know it is humorous unless I listened closely to the lyrics!
Thrustin, I recommend you ask a moderator, such as Urban Hatemonger, to merge your songwriting threads into one, the Thrustin Collection, because the rules at the top of the songwriting section say:
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RULES:
From this moment onwards we will only be allowing each member to have one single thread in the songwriting forum where they will be able to post all of their work.
To do this all you have to do is send a PM to a moderator stating that you wish to have your threads merged. We will then do this for you and your work will be safe.
If you are new here and starting your first thread in this forum please ensure you call your thread 'your username's Collection.'
If you have any questions about this don't hesitate to contact a moderator.
Read more: http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...#ixzz0dM6aTPLq
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This may increase the number of people who view your work, since I think people tend to gravitate toward threads that have more views. Also, having all your songs in one thread makes following and understanding your style and interests easier.
So, since I replied, does this mean I am pleasuring the Devil now?
I don't know...it just doesn't seem as if selling one's soul to the Devil provides much of a benefit to the person. I thought people sell their soul to the Devil so that they get something in return...but I don't think what happens in your song is what they have in mind! Maybe they are lured in with false promises, and then that's all they receive from the diabolical trixter? Hmm....things to ponder.