I don't have a title or second verse for this yet. Also, the chorus is a bit week. Any suggestion would be appreciated.
Verse:
She grabs her coat
She slaps my face
I'm taking too long
Coming on too strong
I'm a disgrace.
She wipes a tear from her face
She's storming out
She says I'm wrong but still don't know just what about
Pre-Chorus
Maybe I'm wrong
Maybe you are right
Did I confuse your desire?
Your desire for a fight
Chorus:
Is that what you think would make me love you?
As long as you love me too
Is that what you think would make me love you?
Well baby, I'm all over you
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We've gone from the Beatles to the Black Eyed Peas... what's next?
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