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Old 02-01-2010, 08:00 PM   #7 (permalink)
storymilo
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Well guys, what do you think of this?

VERSE 1
I'm staring out the window
of my parent's basement
You know, I just can't remember what went wrong
Can you?

VERSE 2
Oh, oh, oh, oh,
I'm hurting, oh
You know, I just can't remember what went wrong
Can you?

VERSE 3
Society just doesn't know
what life is, oh,
I just can't remember, can you?

CHORUS
Oooooooh, I'm lost
Oooooooh, it just feels like frost
Oooooooh, I'm lost
It hurts, it hurts, I hurt,
since the day you left me.....
What went wrong...

VERSE 4
Why is the government
always like this,
oh, oh, oh, oh, oh,
ok, yeah, I'm just...
lost

VERSE 5
And why can't people,
why can't you,
just,
understaaaaaaaaaaaand!!!!!

CHORUS
Oooooooh, I'm lost
Oooooooh, it just feels like frost
Oooooooh, I'm lost
It hurts, it hurts, I hurt,
since the day you left me.....
What went wrong...

VERSE 1 [Reprise]

I'm staring out the window
of my parent's basement
You know, I just can't remember what went wrong
Can you?

CHORUS
Oooooooh, I'm lost
Oooooooh, it just feels like frost
Oooooooh, I'm lost
It hurts, it hurts, I hurt,
since the day you left me.....
What went wrong...

VERSE 1 [Reprise 2]
I'm staring out the window
of my parent's basement
You know, I just can't remember what went wrong
Can yooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuu?

It......

hurts.....


I was thinking of having a sort of G, D, E chord arrangement going throughout. What do ya guys think?
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