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Originally Posted by Urban Hatemonger
Come on you can't argue with the genius of the last 2 lines
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XD
Nah, but seriously, this mos def isn't the best song I've ever seen on here.
It's probably not the worst, a while back there was an EXTREMELY angry rap song along the same lines, except it was like 3 pages long. I think in terms of horrible-ness, that's the worst I've seen in my short time being on here.
Anyway, there are some technical problems with your song that make it somewhat hard for me to get. The first is that the chorus is three lines long, and while that's not the end of the world if you have a fourth, instrumental, line in there, or one of your lines takes up twice as long as the others, it can sound quite awkward if you don't have one of these things.
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I know all those girls you been messin around with i dont want your STD's.
So boy quit with your chat i dont wanna talk about my cat, i dont wanna see your face, now leave.
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lolwut?
Aside from the fact that that is epic genius if you are a troll, I will assume you are just someone looking for criticism, and thus I will tell you that these lines make me want to shoot myself in the head.
Actually, that's going in my sig.