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Old 02-10-2010, 01:22 PM   #21 (permalink)
BillyShears
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YOU MUST READ THE DESCRIPTION BEFORE YOU READ THE SONG (or you may believe I'm an idiot)

Here's one I'd like some input on! It's a joke song making fun of the people who right about the government in their songs whether or not they know what they're talking about. I think it needs more substance. Lyrical suggestions are appreciated.

I'm Making a Political Statement
though I don't understand it
I'm Making a Political Statement
seems this genre demands it

I don't really know what to think or say
so I'll yell that the government should just go away

I'm Making a Political Statement
about war and taxes and stuff
I'm Making a Political Statement
It doesn't matter if you've had enough

Who cares what they stand for?
It's cool to dislike them
let's knock down their doors!
we rebels resent them
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