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Originally Posted by t3hplatyz0rz
Just in general, if you think of the melody of your song as being the same as another song is not a good thing.
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lol yeh i know..
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Originally Posted by t3hplatyz0rz
I don't think that beguiled should be a vocab word. It's not that complicated of a word. Hierophant. That should be a vocab word. But not beguiled.
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Sorry I don't quite understand what you mean? I just put cheated/deceived/hypnotised because I just wanted to know what ppl thought would sound better..
But otherwise are you saying the main problem is that second verse is too short? I left it short cos I had nothing else to really express but I guess the song might sound a bit repetitive.
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Originally Posted by t3hplatyz0rz
Also, just random, but I used to think that "beginning" and "beginnin'" were the same, but they're not. One rhymes with "one wing", the other rhymes with "one win".
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I see what you mean, but I think it's just a case of one rhyming better, not that they don't rhyme at all - it depends on what part of the word you emphasize.