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Old 02-25-2010, 03:03 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Default A song my friend wrote

Hey. Our rhythm guitarist wrote this song. I thought it was REALLY cliche. Can you help me help him make it better please? He's got a great riff and I don't want to ruin it with these lyrics. Thanks.

The way she looks at me
I just cant stop lookin oover
To see
If shes
lookin back at meee
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