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Old 02-26-2010, 03:49 PM   #18 (permalink)
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You're right. The relationship IS simple. Actually, it's not even a relationship, he just likes her and wants to dedicate this song to her. That and the fact that we're 13 makes it a bit hard for him to write a good song about a relationship. As long as he wants us to keep this topic, I don't know where we can go. http://www.musicbanter.com/images/smilies/jailed.gif

Can you think of any way to make it longer without using cliches?

Just write. It doesn't really matter what comes out of your pen that much. So long as you write.
I mean, I could give you an outline or whatever, but then it wouldn't really be your song.
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