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Old 03-02-2010, 03:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
kevin55521
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Here's a bit more to add to your song. i basically took your concept of a past love thats deserted you, but now your (seemingly) better without her.


U keep sayin that we-re fire and ice
its like im from a dif-REnt world
and now you say i have it all,
but truth is...

i never knew what it was like.
and my life, is never right.
i had no pages like a hollow book.
so i wrote me a brand. new. sto-ry

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

those days, so hard
brought so close but pushed so far
and my heart, became shards
drunk and lost in the bar.
face down in my drink
you were only thing i know
no lower for me to sink
i had to let-you-go...

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

you left me, im doin good
on the top. like you
never thought i could...

i dont care what you thought
and now you know that you should
never have let me rot
i bet you'd change things you could...

now im here, now im big.
my past is gone and im a whole
im a star, and i have it a-ll

and im here.. and im big...
with nothing left to do.
im a star, i have it all
and the only thing i dont have is you...
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