Say Goodbye
It's not finished yet but it's more than 2 lines so I figure it would be worthwhile to post it here. I don't know how to continue so any suggestions are appreciated.
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Say Goodbye
Were we played by fate?
Was it really your time?
Would we have met
if you were still alive?
I never knew you
yet you changed my life.
Would it have been different
if you had more time?
This doesn't seem fair
'cause you were more
than I could ever be.
Do I still deserve to live happily?
Now your family mourns you
and I'm asking why,
why didn't you get a chance
to say goodbye?
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I know it's depressing & I'll probably get reamed for it but I don't care. I just look at it as I'm thinking of somebody besides myself . . . So I don't care what you say or think about it, I just posted it here to get advice from people who know what the hell they're doing.
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 My life was like a fairytale . . . Except I left Mr. Charming for his sister
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