Hey, everybody!
Thank you very very much for your feedback! Especially t3hplatyz0rz thank you for the quite detailed correction of my English! And thank you VEGANGELICA, you're German is quite perfect :-) Thanks for your praise! Here is the whole text:
Str.: It is dark and cloudy outside the most part of the day
so cold, dusty and gray that the happiness is getting away
This peculiar silence everywhere because the snow has covered every noise
Animals nowhere for the reason that they also don't like this freezing ice
it seems like the colors of the nature are reduced to black and white
may be nice the first moment but anytime the winter is adequade
the plant need fluid water, warmth and sun to grow
with the animals the same thing and the humans need it, too
Ref: But then theres always coming another spring,
where the white curtain falls and the birds begin to sing
so that the world is colorful once more
The sun gets powerful enough to make me warm,
to shine into my heart and expel the storm
so that I am feeling much better then ever before
The whole universe is now full of light
and I cant complain cause I am feeling all right
Br.:Often the progress of a terrestrial year
is the same as the progress of live
there are times where you are so much in hurry
that its hard to imagine to survive
you are learning, you are working, you are freezing, you are sweating
and it always doesn't be of use
you are hunting, you trying to get through it
but the bad stuff only make you confuse
Ref
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