So I stumbled across this forum just recently, I guess this will be my hello post as well as a submission. I read over a few postings and basically thought to myself "I wish I could write half that well". I thought about the excuses I always make for why I can't and eventually said screw it and tried to write a song about it.
The whole thing, including writing this post took about 15 mins, I'm open to any criticism, given this is the first set of lyrics I've ever remotely finished I take it as a learning experience. Also I began writing at 6am and am going to bed after posting this so, I expect the result to be hilarious when I wake up.
That all aside here it is! Untitled currently, you tell me when comes to mind and what the words tell you!
(Btw I had Panic!'s song "Lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off" stuck in my head so any rhythmic similarities are to that song.)
Quote:
A million words you wanna say
But it won't come out today
A thousand thoughts roaming inside
but it just won't come out right.
You want to scream it out in silence
Hope that everything's alright
But how pitiful for you,
your muse is on vacation...
(chorus)
Because it's like being locked inside
Without the secrets want to hide
Those thousand awkward lyrics
Bursting from your mind
Expanding ever outward
And redefining time
Expression turning inward but,
two wrongs don't make a right
Finally it comes through like,
A meteor of hope
Slashing past the sky
In that brilliant flash of light
You write down all the records,
And never miss a beat
Then suddenly it hits you,
poor thing was in your sleep!
(chorus)
Instead you spend all of your morning
Trying to find that beat
Wearing out your six string
Keeping on your feet
Maybe one day you will find it
The everlasting light
The motivation to shout it out
The inspiration for your fight
(chorus)
No, two wrongs never make a right
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Thanks in advance for anything! Including telling me rules I missed that I should know about her, I would rather not be the newest troll
