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Old 03-23-2010, 07:04 PM   #20 (permalink)
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A lot of your lyrics are literal in their meaning. That's not a bad thing but because your lyrics are negative, in general, it feels like everything you write is largely self serving. You're attempting to present your feelings with murderous intent and there is simply no progression in your lyrics. It is as though you are stuck within each lyric.
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