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Old 04-02-2010, 11:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
kimber
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Sunlight is at once stolen to
preserve the golden beauty of your hair
To adorn your pale eyes with green
the leaves cede their color
The Morning Glories bloom in Spring
to give the purple to your dress.
But the bitter, solitary ocean provides
not but his loneliness.

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