unfortunately its not the style i usually write, as i more focus on catchy lines that people will repeat in their minds, which I focus more towards song writing.
Not in regards to the style, just regards to choice of words. As awesome as the phrase "hollow man" is, and as meaningful as it is, i hear it alot in this style of writing. I would say when i read that - i thought "Cliche." I will say that is the only point that i really thought that, which is pretty rare. So good job!
As a piece, however, i really actually enjoyed analyzing this. I think there was a very clear picture painted. Again i cant be much of a critic for this style but i can say thanks for sharing and if you post any more hit me up!
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