Wow! It has been awhile since I've posted anything on MusicBanter, but I have been writing in my spare time, not so much lyrics as short little lines (which I would love to transition into songs) and a couple of poems here and there. As always I love any feedback, I really feel it helps my writing abillity. Here's a couple things I've written in the last couple months, enjoy!
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Here's some random-ish short liners I would love to turn into songs but just haven't felt how to transition them.
"I'm beginning to find another point of view, one that's even better with you."
"When this place burns, it rains ashes, and the sun dissapears."
"I'm Mr. Copacetic, but I'm a lack luster ****in' ***got, and no one can respect that."
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Here's some poems I've written
"Be Still My Heart"
My heart is pounding
Racing at 1,000 miles per minute
My body quivers at your touch
And my breath shortens with each inhale
I become encaptured with your soft almond eyes
Your lips are satin with a bite of taste
You are the apple in Eden
Forbidden, but be still my heart
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"A Slip Of Sand Through The Hourglass"
I feel her prescence in my every step
Like waves in the ocean
That beat against the tired beach
Every motion, every current, it can feel
A lighthouse's beam scatters across the ocean
Coast to coast it fills my empty space
I sweat and I ache
As her love radiates through the undertow
Clouds burst into eons of melacholy rain
It fills the river as it's sediments
Flows into it's tributaries
As my soul is released from this Hell
I'm like a grain of sand
Slipping through the hourglass
But in the end
Aren't we all?
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