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Old 04-13-2010, 12:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
Gray-M
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Post Need YOUR opinion please! Lyrics

been writing lyrics for a couple months, just trying new things all the time. This is one that ive only just started. Might seem a bit ****ed up when its not sung on a beat :/ anyway..

Sitin here in a dark spot with ma lap-top
still smashed from the last joint,
motherfu*kers still grabbed by ma last song,
"crazy days" was ma last stop,
all a did was open note pad and then blast on
jottin words till am bored or till am past points
a can keep goin like andy goram saving slap shots
but slap shots is a hokey term and andy goram was a soccer goaly
holy s*** you totally wrecked ma rap song
and this is ma song, this is ma story
but am not from balamory, am fae paisley,
a stay crazy, and a do ma job every day,
but only it pays daily
a need cash, everbodys on the same boat
i'd do anythin expect from f*** a male goat
f*** that, f*** wit, f*** who, f*** them
f*** the government cos theyd send anyone out to war, but them

Last edited by Gray-M; 04-13-2010 at 01:53 PM.
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