Thank you so much for your advice and your opinion. I am a fan of Taylor and her songs have a big influance on me as well. The thing that differs from hers is that in my song the girl is wishing for the guy back, still upset about it in the moment and predicting what is going on.
I am glad you feel it is direct and honest. It was coming from my heart and soul at the time, all emotions. I have a hard time dealing with hard situations so I turn them into poems or songs to get that anger/sadness out. Now you think if I edited up into something a little more positive and not so direct that they could sell? I plan on saving money up for this songwriter's camp in Nashville and try selling it, but didn't really want to waste all that money to make a fool of myself.
Also, if I kept song like that but changed the last verse to something a little more positive so people don't get the wrong idea, you think that would be a good change?
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