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duga · 04-20-2010, 02:25 PM

You need to use some transitions between paragraphs and work on the flow of your sentence structure. I understand what you are trying to do with short and blunt sentences, but that technique shouldn't be used more than once in a paper because after a while it starts to wear on the reader.

04-20-2010, 02:25 PM	#3 (permalink)
duga MB quadrant's JM Vincent Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Washington, DC Posts: 3,762	You need to use some transitions between paragraphs and work on the flow of your sentence structure. I understand what you are trying to do with short and blunt sentences, but that technique shouldn't be used more than once in a paper because after a while it starts to wear on the reader. __________________ Confusion will be my epitaph...