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Originally Posted by mr dave
also why does 'he' only turn into Mr. Walker at the end?
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Do you think it would be better to mention his name more or remove his name entirely?
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and when did someone else die in there?
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Originally Posted by Conan
He saw his body near the bottle that he drank that night, and someone else's in the vehicle that he drove that night.
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Here.
Again your welcome to say if something needs to be changed.
This isn't something i'd ever seriously write about, by the way...