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Old 05-20-2010, 06:36 PM   #90 (permalink)
Sljslj
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Wow, you're good... that's pretty much what I was going for. I was just thinking earlier that the constant swearing was crippling my writing and that I need to slow down on it a bit. As far as the "Cry, cry, cry" part, I've been toying with the idea of keeping or trashing it.

Thanks Veg.
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