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Originally Posted by jodyWayne
Hi Sljslj,
I have a minute or two, so I thought I would come and read some nice songs, yours.
I like, "24 hours". I understand the theme. And I like the wording. This song is very well done.
I like, "Even If It's No Good". Some very good thought, led to some very good lyric. The thing I like most about your work is that it's emotional. Your songs have a lot of energy. That's important, because that draws attention and helps get your point across.
Autobiograph-I
Sounds like me at between age 2 to 3.
Why do you think they call them the terrible twos.
Take care,
jW
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I'm very glad you like "Even If It's No Good", i had alot of fun writing this one. I agree with you that my stuff is emotional, that's how art should be; if it's not and you don't put a piece of yourself into everything you create, then it's essentially worthless... but that's just my opinion and it's debatable.
Are you saying "Autobiograph-I!" is juvenille? If so, I won't disagree. I am aware that these are not the best lyrics, but it might make for an interesting song one day.
Thanks for coming back and looking at my work, I appreciate it. Also, I'm glad to hear your mom's okay =).