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Old 06-18-2010, 01:38 PM   #17 (permalink)
Aidy
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Experimenting with more "universal lyrics" at the moment, writing about heartbreak and deep feelings is fairly difficult when you don't really feel that way, and songs of this nature normally make me cringe, but like they say, it's good to leave your comfort zone once in a while ;-) Oh yeah, I also wanted to have a third verse where everything kind of resolves itself!

Pain in my heart
She stood up, I sat down
I said what's wrong with you now?
Cos you're not saying anything, and I don't know what to do
So she started to speak
She said are you the devil?
I said what?
Cos you don't feel anything
You don't seem to feel anything

And I've got this pain in my heart
I've got this pain in my heart

She stood proud, I stood low
I don't want you to go
Cos I feel everything, and I know that's news to you
I've got feelings and stuff
I've got a heartbeat and blood
That pumps through my veins
Doesn't that make us the same?

She said let me explain
Blood don't make us the same
If you feel it inside, then you've got to confide
In my heart and in my soul
Not because you've been told
But because you love me
And because you need me

You can have a listen to it here
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