Oh! You are in love!!!
Bungalow, I think she will love your poem you are working on.
Really, this is all very sweet, and partly because it isn't *all* sweet. You are very blatant and specific about all the activities you have done over which you'd choose being with her. And I love the concluding stanza, a very good and direct summary of your feelings and the poem:
Quote:
SO PLEASE don’t ever ask me,
Or thank me for my time, ‘cause
More than you can really know
The pleasure's been all mine.
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I noticed one spelling error you may want to correct: in "Inner-tube’d, to let the river chose my course," I think you mean "choose" instead of chose.
I think when she reads your poem, she will melt. This is a lovely gift for her.