I love them. Honestly. The first was amazing. It makes me think a lot about how a person reviewing things really feels. It's like so in touch with actual life. Wow, your inspiration must have been a strong one, because it shows through your words. Your second is funny in the ending, I love it!!! Keep it up!!!
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