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Originally Posted by kayleigh.
I'd like feedback on how I could improve my entrys.
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You could start by not posting all your videos in a line
I dunno if it's just my browser or anything, but it stretches the horizontal length of the post for me, meaning I'd have to scroll left-to-right to read it all. Personally, I usually just post them vertically, one below the other, sometimes in rows of two to make a little video box if I'm feeling particularly zany. I like the way you went about the whole thing though - one or two sentences about your personal highlights and that, rather than droning on about each one and boring people like I do.
As for Justice themselves, they're not a bunch I listen to, but that could change. It takes anything from minutes to months for me to act on a recommendation from anyone, so who knows eh.
Keep these coming by the way - always good to see posts like this popping up around the place.