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Old 07-22-2010, 02:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
VEGANGELICA
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Welcome to MusicBanter, Aaron.

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I listened to your acoustic guitar song. I felt the guitar was nicely strummed with a good rhythm, although the chords seemed somewhat repetitive. Your voice sounds solid and strong. The chant-like quality of the melody, however, makes me think of the song more as background music rather than a stand-alone song, especially since understanding the words was difficult for me. I liked the idea of the syncopated tinkling glass or box-hitting sound, which gave the piece an experimental feel, although I think an actual drum or bell might have felt more professional. The "ooo-ooo" vocals near the end were kind of frightening to me for some reason!

I hope my feedback helps! Not just insults!
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