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Old 07-30-2010, 04:38 PM   #7 (permalink)
thomasracer56
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Originally Posted by Sljslj View Post
I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet.

Bitch slapping her heart
And French kissing your pleasures
Your lives, a castle of infinity
Burned down by physical obscenities

If you could see yourself
Through all the red and black
You'd try to save yourself
And you'd never look back
The second chunk o' lyrics(PARAGRAPH/STANZA 2) would not be bad at all for a chorus.
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