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Originally Posted by Sljslj
I got something. It's not that great, but atleast it's something. Not sure if they're both verses or a verse and a chorus yet.
Bitch slapping her heart
And French kissing your pleasures
Your lives, a castle of infinity
Burned down by physical obscenities
If you could see yourself
Through all the red and black
You'd try to save yourself
And you'd never look back
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The second chunk o' lyrics(PARAGRAPH/STANZA 2) would not be bad at all for a chorus.