Hi, Erica!
I'm sorry, I'm late, I know, but it is summertime and the weather is fine... :-)
Wow, these are such nice lyrics, I like it very much! A very good beginning with "coffee-colored" because it's almost a bit unexpecting and zooms very artful from the coffee-colored things to the coffee itself. And it's really so elegant and fascinating how you mention the problems of the world based on this banal coffee, great!
But I would add one thing: The first, I associate with coffee is to wake up, so I think such a "wake up" would fit quite well in your lyrics, e.g. that the people have to wake up or something like that, I think, you know what I mean!
Unfortunately, I didn't write something about coffee, because I had no idea what to write and therefore I'm even more fascinated what you made out of it, that you can make the world a better place with lyrics about coffee!
~Schmidti
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