I can't listen right now, but I definitely like this. I feel like it's a lot more poetic than I'm used to. I know I just said the same thing to Erica but I mean this in a different way. I mean it's something where you can take the lines out of context and still know it's from a poem or something meant to flow.
"and with his ash / they made his casket" is a really, REALLY strong line, and it's perfect for the ending. This is great.
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