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Old 11-12-2010, 08:21 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by David Graey View Post
keep it up! Are you writing them as poetry or as lyrics?
im getting feeling of poetry as opposed to lyrics cuz there hasnt really been a chorus in any of them. i mean not ALL songs have a chorus. but the majority do. and if your aiming for a song and WANT a chorus, some of those verses could easily be transformed into one

anyways, im really enjoying reading these.

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