dont really know much about cuttn, but i've seen a few documentaries on it.
but looking at your poem/song, you manage to use simple words to portray huge emotion and thats good in a writer. Many self-proclaimed poets nowadays think that by using every word in a thesaurus, they make great poetry, and that's not always the case.
cant really see it as a performance piece, but your skills are valuable. keep working!
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