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Originally Posted by Dirty
You ever gonna actually record rap stuff do you think? Cause if so I'll follow up on what Conan said a little bit and throw some really good pointers your way. I make raps and one area i really excel where a lot of people don't is transitioning between rhyme schemes. But I don't wanna waste time explaining it if you don't really give a ****
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Whoa, sorry man - I neglected this journal and didn't see that you'd responded. And yes, I'm looking for pointers for my rap lyrics, for sure.
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This isn't rap lyrics; it's the reason I actually came back to this thread - I finished a song, wrote the music and everything and am kind of pleased with it, but I'm not ready to post a link yet...
2011 Zarathustra
Just another book to throw into the fire
They call you a heretic; you call them all liars
Uncovering the truth should be the best relief you've had
But when you go to tell them, you just feel that it's useless
Come down from the mountain now
You'll find closure somehow
You want to tell them God is dead
Day after day, living on, moving onwards
The things you know now just will not disperse
A nagging suspicion, then it became knowing
Facts piled up, and now you just want relief
Come down from the mountain now
You'll find closure somehow
You want to tell them God is dead
Now you're alone
It's over
Smile once
Walk away
Walk away
Come down from the mountain now
You'll find closure somehow
You want to tell them God is dead