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OK, I get it now- I've edited it to eleven paragraphs and improved the punctuation.
I thank y'all for your enlightenment and education towards the elucidation of my imagination.

Jathon I recommend you request this be moved to the journalism sub-forum. Give it a less specific title and continue your writing. People are more likely to read that much at once over there.

That being said, I get your point, and beautiful prose.

Thanks for your encouragement Carpe Mortem.
But sorry, I cannot find the journalism sub-forum, can you direct me?
Also, how do I request that this post be moved?

Just hit up one of the mods, anyone whose name is bold and blue, they'll know where to direct it. On the MB homepage its at the bottom of the first block of subforums.

Members Journal is the fourth forum from the top on the home page. PM a mod if you'd like it moved; the most active members of the current team are Urban Hat€monger ?, Vanilla, Janszoon, and Goofle.

EDIT: What Carpe said. Ninja poster.

If you ask Urban to do it he'll take that as a sign of power, and having proven yourself, he won't hit you with a soap-filled sock.

too long
didn't read
not gonna
don't care

Soap?
What's that?