Your help greatly appreciated! It's for my school project...
 

Hi! This is due in a month and I'm suppose to play a song for my school project. Can you help me critique it please? Here is the link:

youtube.com/watch?v=UWwYiZjmYbw&feature=channel_page

Anything you notice wrong, including playing too fast, bad posture, poor dynamics, please point out right away!

Thanks!